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austin's picture
austin

If i were to rank you with skill you would be expert and i would be novice.....Im a beginner

war....war never changes

Nagashi Kyoshiro's picture
Nagashi Kyoshiro

Done! I think i'll upload the fixed and re-detailed one this evening, please criticize on it to see what is still missing ok! :D and btw, wht's wrong with the sniper's arm rest? O,O?

If you see my drawings and notice something wrong, don't hesitate to criticize! I'm always open :D

Nagashi Kyoshiro's picture
Nagashi Kyoshiro

Right! Thx a lot for the heads up! :)
To be honest i was only bored when suddenly i decided to draw only a sniper. Then i want to challenge myself to draw a character using it and so this idea came up! Hahaha i guess i still need lots of work to improve, i'll fix it right up! :D

If you see my drawings and notice something wrong, don't hesitate to criticize! I'm always open :D

Painitami's picture
Painitami

Well try to write your ideas for your characters cause it helps a lot :) BTW don't draw anything when u are bored cause the outcome wont be as u expect it to be ^_-

Religion, ideology, resources, land, spite, love or just because… No matter how pathetic the reason, it’s enough to start war. War will never cease to exist… reasons can be thought up after the fact… Human nature pursues strife.

Painitami's picture
Painitami

Hi!
Well your character is good but i don't see any special traits in her i mean i have seen sniper girls with long hairs everywhere that all of them were similar to each other but had a different hair color or somethin else. For example, Luffy from One Piece has a straw hat which we've never seen anywhere before or Natsu from Fairy Tale wears a scarf which is unique. If u don't add special traits your character; it will become like a copy from countless anime characters that we've seen...So in order to make it completely unique and original and create something new; u must create something special for her like unique clothing and hair style with tattoos all over her body (Revy - Black Lagoon) or a red jacket with white hair and 2 unique hand guns (Dante - Devil May Cry) ... Hope this things help u ^_^ BTW i'll upload a picture that shows u which areas need more work and which need to be fixed. (Yellow areas need more work and red areas need fixing)
http://s2.picofile.com/file/7838673866/img_20130709_00221.jpg

Religion, ideology, resources, land, spite, love or just because… No matter how pathetic the reason, it’s enough to start war. War will never cease to exist… reasons can be thought up after the fact… Human nature pursues strife.